考研英语作文的评分标准解析
作文是考研英语中很重要的一部分，得高分自然是所有考生梦寐以求的，但是怎样的作文才能得到阅卷老师的青睐，是有一定标准可循的，下面我们就把这些标准总结一下，希望大家在以后的复习中，能够有侧重地练习。
分数档
评分标准
第五档
A节（9~10分）
B节（17~20分）
很好地完成了试题规定的任务。
包含了所有内容要点；
使用丰富的语法结构和词汇；
语言自然流畅，语法错误极少；
有效地采用了多种衔接手法，文字连贯，层次清晰；
格式与语域恰当贴切。
对目标读者完全产生了预期的效果。
第四档
A节（7~8分）
B节（13~16分）
较好地完成了试题规定的任务。
包含所有内容要点，允许漏掉一、两个次重点；
使用较丰富的语法结构和词汇；
语言基本准确，只有在试图使用较复杂或较高级词汇时才有个别错误；
格式与语域较恰当。
对目标读者产生了预期的效果。
第三档
A节（5~6分）
B节（9~12分）
基本完成了试题规定的任务。
虽漏掉了一些内容，但包含多数内容要点；
应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的需求；
有一些语法及词汇错误，但不影响理解；
采用了简单的衔接手法，内容较连贯，层次较清晰；
格式和语域基本合理。
对目标读者基本产生了预期的效果。
第二档
A节（3~4分）
B节（5~8分）
未能按要求完成试题规定的任务。
漏掉或未能有效阐述一些内容要点，写了一些无关内容；
语法结构单调、词汇项目有限；
有较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解；
未采用恰当的衔接手法，内容缺少连贯性；
格式和语域不恰当。
未能清楚地传达信息给读者。
第一档
A节（1~2分）
B节（1~4分）
未完成试题规定的任务。
明显遗漏主要内容，且有许多不想关的内容；
语法项目和词汇的使用单调、重复；
语言错误多，有碍读者对内容的理解，语言运用能力差；
未使用任何衔接手法，内容不连贯，缺少组织、分段；
无格式与语域概念。
未能传达信息给读者。
零档（0分）
所传达的信息或所用语言太少，无法评价；内容与要求无关或无法辨认。
以上就是考研英语作文全部的评分标准，希望大家可以对照查漏补缺，祝大家的作文水平每天都有新的提高。
2016考研英语作文预测
2016考研英语大纲已于9月18日出炉，跟2015年考研英语大纲相比，没有什么大的变化。现在老师就为考生预测一下2016考研大纲的作文。
一、小作文
1. 小作文必备书信之申请信
1)Directions:
Imagine you are a student who wants to apply for the New Star scholarship offered by your university. Write a letter to the person concerned which should include
(1) the purpose of writing the letter;
(2) your qualifications for the scholarship;
(3) your thanks.
You should write about 100 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming" instead.
You do not need to write the address.
2)经典范文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you in order to apply for the New Star Scholarship.
As you can see from the attached grade sheet, I am one of the top students in my department. I have also represented the university at the 8th English Speaking Contest, where I was placed first. It is because I have attained such high standards that the Dean, Prof. Wang, suggested I apply for the scholarship. I believe that I do not only do well in my study, also contribute to campus life and our university in my extracurricular activities, particularly as departmental head of the Student Union.
Thank you in advance for considering my application.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
3)推荐原因：
首先，申请信是考研英语大纲规定的必考类型；
其次，纵观考研英语小作文的命题规律，对于书信的考查无非都是对12种常见书信类型的反复对考查；
再次，2006年(英语一)考查了“申请资助贫困儿童”这一话题，因此相关的申请信请同学们务必关注、背诵以及仿写。
2. 小作文必备书信之询问信
1)Directions:
You are preparing for an English test and are in need of some reference books. Write a letter to the sales department of a bookstore to ask for:
(1) detailed information about the books you want,
(2) methods of payment,
(3) time and way of delivery
2)经典范文
Dear Sir or Madam,
As a student to take CET-6 in this coming December, I am writing to ask if there are some high quality test preparation materials.
I wonder if you have the following books: a vocabulary book covering the 5,500 words for the CET-6 test as well as past test papers with keys and model essays and a Longman Dictionary of Contemporary English, which I can turn for help. Besides, how should I pay for these books? By cash or by other means? Finally, if I order these books now, when can I get them and how will these books be sent to my house?
I would be grateful if you could give me an early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
3)推荐原因：
首先，询问信是考研英语大纲规定的必考类型；
其次，纵观考研英语小作文的命题规律，对于书信的考查无非都是对12种常见书信类型的反复对考查；
再次，2014年(英语二)考查了“向未来室友询求生活建议”这一话题，因此相关的询问信请同学们务必关注、背诵以及仿写。
二、大作文
1. 英语一
预测一
Directions:
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following pictures. In your essay, you should:
1) describe the drawings briefly,
2) explain its intended meaning, and then
3) give your comments.
You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)
This picture is humorous but reveals a profound meaning. According to this figure, we can see that two individuals are digging wells for water with spades. However, one person gives up looking for water because he digs even three holes but still cannot find any water, while the other one insists on digging one hole and finally receives an abundance of water.
This picture tells us one principle which is a famous proverb called “Success belongs to the persevering”. It is obvious that the chance of finding water is fair enough to the two men. Nevertheless, the reason leading to the completely different consequences is only their different attitudes. As students, we should not doubt that the God will favor one special group and feel upset and hopeless. To be frank, our society is realistic and it provides everyone with same opportunities. We need to seize the opportunities, correct our attitudes and be down-to-earth persons. I firmly believe that we can achieve our goals by persevering painstaking efforts. Nothing is impossible as long as we do our best. In addition, sometimes insisting itself is not absolutely unquestioned. If we choose an unpractical goal, it is just a behavior of wasting life. On the contrary, it is wise to set an objective cautiously and then keep going without any complaints.
To sum up, selecting a right target and always working for it is of great significance for all of us.
推荐理由：
1. 今年考永恒性话题可能性大过大事件
2. 永恒性话题应该会偏向相对积极的概念。
3. 根据政治环境因素，很可能不会涉及针砭时弊的任何话题，所以话题还是以个人素养、理想为导向。
2016考研英语小作文：技巧为先，文采其次
根据《考研英语大纲》规定，从2005年取消了听力之后，考研英语作文就有两类了，一个大作文，另一个是新增的小作文（10分）。英语一的大作文为图画作文（20分），英语二的为图表作文（15分）。其中的小作文，多是辞职信、道歉信、感谢信等应用文体，它的形式是给出提示要点，要求考生根据要求表达清楚要点。它的评分重点在于信息点的覆盖；内容的组织，语言的准确性；格式及语域的恰当。鉴于小作文不需要华丽的词藻和吸引阅卷人眼球的文采，只要掌握一定的方法技巧，在格式、语言和要点等方面下足功夫，拿到理想的.分数还是不难的。那么一起来看看小作文写作技巧吧。
一、格式
1. 称呼：英语应用文称呼有这样的特点：
1）如果是不认识的人，一般称呼为敬词+尊称。例如，Dear Sir or Madam 或者 To Whom It May Concern (需注意每个单词首字母都大写)。
2）如果是写给关系正式的某团体或个人，称呼为敬词+尊称+名。例如，Dear Mr. Xx,或Dear Ms.xx,；
3）对于关系较亲密的人可以直呼其名，即 Dear xx,。
同时需要注意的是：1.称呼要顶格写；2. 称呼之后要加逗号或者冒号。这里推荐大家用逗号，因为历年的高分范文都是用逗号的。
2. 正文：正文格式一般有两种格式：一是缩进式，即首段开头空四个字母，段落之间不空行; 另一种是齐头式，即每段开头不空格，但是各段之间空一行。跨考教育肖方方老师建议考生采用缩进式，因为如果用齐头式，段间空行的话很可能答题空间不够，导致字数不够。
3. 结语：结语要注意要留出两行。一行是靠后写类似汉语“此致敬礼”的话也就是“Sincerely yours， ”或者“Yours sincerely ，”一定要注意这个地方的结尾是有逗号的，如果丢掉了逗号，则会扣掉一份，请大家一定要注意。同时，还需要注意落款，落款部分不能写自己的名字。按照directions 中的要求使用名字。英语一一般是Liming结尾，英语二为Zhangwei。同时请大家注意名字后面一定不要加任何的符号。很多的学生喜欢在此打点号，请大家一定要注意，这里会被扣掉一分。
二、语言
写作用词准确是最基础的要求之一。其次，句型可以多变，例如既有并列句，也有复合句，还有从句，但注意语法运用要正确。此外还要注意，正式语言一般是写给具有正式关系的团体或机构，这种情况不用缩略语和口语用法。英语二的小作文一般写给正式关系的机构的文章片偏多。除了正式的文体以外，其他的文体皆为非正式文体，像写给朋友的书信等。英语一的小作文就是较为非正式一些。
一般小作文的考查要求中会体现出写该篇的目的和场合，所以考生在写作时要注意针对不同场合使用不同语言，使交流得以进行。另外，考生也要注意不同的应用文有不同的用语。建议考生对某些应用文的格式和习惯用语，应该加以熟悉和背诵，以便运用自如。
三、其他
考生在考试时注意在看到题目要求后不要忙于动笔，虽说小作文的字数充其量在一百多个单词，但是依旧要在脑子里理清思路。最好能够在仔细审题以后，认真列个提纲，这样更有利于思路清晰。
写作时，注意表达清楚以下几个方面：
首先交代清楚写信目的；其次为了让阅卷者对你的文章结构及表意一目了然，注意关联词或衔接词的运用；接下来，应该对个人的观点进行阐述。最后，行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句。在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节。
以上就是关于英语小作文的一些复习方法和写作技巧，希望能对2016年的考生有所帮助，祝大家复习顺利！
2015考研临考英语一作文终极预测
第一部分：作文预测
大作文话题类型：1. 社会现象类； 2. 抽象品质及社会问题类
预测话题包括：1. 网络类（网购、微博、微信等新现象）；2. 抽象品质类（梦想与行动、创新、 坚持等）3. 环境类（交通状况、动物/资源保护、节约型社会等）
应用文考察类型：书信
预测书信种类：投诉信、咨询信、请求信、祝贺信、申请信、感谢信
第二部分：部分预测作文范文（提醒大家，划线部分为建议背诵句型，括号内容为可以替换内容）
大作文预测话题一：网络类（网购、微博、微信等新现象）
What is subtly demonstrated in the above drawing is that in front of a desktop sits a fashionable lady who is staring at the screen with shocked expression wearing on cheeks and huge sweat dropping from her forehead. What is spit from the computer is the lengthy Alipay bill, which can almost be spread as long as two meters. The caption above reads that you should keep away from Taobao and cherish your income.
The objective of the drawer is to show us that utmost attention should be paid to shopping online, which has exerted profound impact on the daily life of the average individuals. We can easily recognize its advantages as follows: e-commerce, which is extremely convenient, can save us a great amount of precious time and we can buy products everywhere we want as long as we can surf online. However, for all the advantages mentioned above, online trading is by no means without its limitations as listed below: we may be cheated by some online retailers, which might be a potential threat to our bank accounts.
Accordingly, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures. For one thing, we should appeal to the authorities to make strict legislations to severely punish those who deliberately spoil the interests of online customers. For another, we should enhance the awareness of residents that rational purchasing is conducive to our income management. Only in this way can we maximize the merits and minimize the demerits of online purchasing.
大作文预测话题二：抽象品质类（梦想与行动、创新、 坚持等）
Wise people used to say that taking actions is of utmost significance in our daily life. This is most vividly illustrated in the given picture, which shows that two young boys both holding guitar are playing different life situations. The boy on the left is daydreaming about the day he gives a perfect concert and is admired by all the fans, while the boy on the right is practicing the guitar and singing skill persistently.
Studying it further, it is easy to figure out that taking actions is the only way to fulfill our dream. Our country, for example, has developed rapidly in terms of economy and science and technology. We have accomplished in about two decades what other emerging countries used to achieve in a century. There is no denying that it is the perseverance and taking actions that really realize the promise they made. If you never take action to do something, you will never have a chance to win. For example, a great number of students choose to take part in the National Entrance Exam for master’s degree. However, those who dreamed of becoming the postgraduates without taking any actions are even tremble at the thought of taking the exam, most of them are escaping the classroom when the first exam is over.
In a word, I believe, just like Forrest Gump said: “Life is like a box of chocolates：you never know what you’re gonna get. ” Unless you have the awareness that action speaks louder than the word.
大作文预测话题三：环境类（交通状况、动物/资源保护、节约型社会等）
（Common as it is, it has deep implication）. As is vividly shown in the cartoon, at least five patients are staying in one hospital who are injured because of jay-walking, driving after drinking and disregarding of the laws. If we take a closer watch, it is of little difficulty to find that one police is patiently explicating the traffic laws to one injured person, standing at a wheel chair which is pushed by one nurse.
There is no doubt that it describes a common phenomenon in our society that traffic problems are more and more severe and what might trigger this affair? （For my part, the following two are of utmost importance.） For one part, the general public have failed to realize the importance of abiding by the traffic regulations and laws（and a big deal of the attention have been distracted by the so-called“great affair”）. Once some drivers easily disregard the traffic signals, so do other drivers who intend to obey the laws. Moreover, the current state of affairs depicted in the drawing, may have been encouraged, though not justified, by the lack of severe legal penalty. If someone does disorderly parking or drives under the influence of alcohol, the punishment is not so harsh that the drivers could afford to learn a heavy lesson from the fine as to never do it again . (If we let this situation continue as it is, ultimately, our society will suffer a great destruction.)
It is advisable for us to take steps to reverse this current evil trend. On one hand, we should cultivate the awareness of people that everyone needs to reflect on his or her uncivilized conducts and strengthen his self-discipline. On the other hand, it is high time that more severe and sound laws and regulations should be introduced to harness and curb this matter. Only in this way, can we crack the hard nut and embrace a bright future.
范文一：
A thought-provoking dialogue between the mother elephant and her own child appears in the first picture. Having growing his teeth, the young elephant is eager to share the exciting news with his mother. However, after repeating his words several times, there is still no response coming from the mother. Meanwhile, the attractive caption in the second photo reads: no trade, no kill.
The above pictures unveil a hazard posed to wildlife due to the expanding scale of world commercial hunting. At least two fundamental factors could contribute to this phenomenon. The industry of commercial hunting have undergone a booming expansion (along with the growing public awareness of the merits of wildlife, which makes/), making hunting unusually profitable. Worse still, lacking knowledge regarding the significance of ecological balance, some people take the gun to chase animals insatiably (and thus cause a severe threat to all life in the world). Apparently, this trend will surely in turn endanger humankind in the long run.
(On no account should we turn a blind eye to such things.//All these factors above make it crucial to take drastic measures to protect the wildlife.) Accordingly, governments all over the world are supposed to unite to work out effective measures against commercial hunting. Additionally, people should be educated from childhood to cultivate the awareness that we and the rare wild animals share the same precious planet. I do believe a harmonious relationship between the wildlife and human beings is awaiting us if we make every effort to promote wildlife protection both nationally and internationally.
范文二：
The drawing does mirror a common social phenomenon and is really thought-provoking. According to the above photo, a couple of elephants are walking forward slowly while the young elephant says to his mother, “Mom, my tusks start to grow up!
But mom, why aren’t you happy about that?”What is conveyed carries the message of the human’s threat on the wild animals by catching and killing.
A host of reasons may make this happen. To start with, an army of hunters have been killing rare wild animals just to make huge profits. That is the very reason why the mother elephant does not glad to hear that her son’s ivory growing. Another significant cause of the rapid reduction of wildlife is the disappearance of their natural habitats. Because the urbanization is advancing fast, forcing the animals give up their original places and change another site which may not be as good as before.
Accordingly, it is imperative for us to take drastic and effective measures to protect the wildlife. On the one hand, we can appeal to the government to make some strict laws to prevent them from being caught and killed. On another level, we must enhance citizen's awareness that loving the nature is everybody's responsibility. Only through these measures are we able to have opportunities to expect a beautiful world and a promising prospect to come.
书信作文预测：投诉信、咨询信、请求信、祝贺信、申请信、感谢信
投诉信
Direction: You just bought an English dictionary from a famous e-commerce site only to find it not as good as you expected. Write an email to the customer service center to
1) complain the poor quality of the dictionary, and
2) give reasons for your complaints.
Dear Mr. Wang,
As a regular customer, I am writing this letter to complain about the quality of dictionary bought from the bookone.com.
I ordered an Oxford Dictionary of Contemporary English a week ago. Apart from the delayed delivery, many pages in the dictionary are missing and some of the pages are reversed, which are totally unacceptable to me.
I would like to get a refund or at least change it for a new one. And trust that you will now consider this matter seriously and make an effort to prevent the recurrence of this kind.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
询问信
Write a letter inquiring about a travel agency about the trip to Mount Huangshan. Some necessary details must be included. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, using “Li Ming” instead.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to travel to Mount Huangshan this summer. I would be most grateful if you could send me information regarding the following information concerned in your agency because my friend John spoke highly of your service.
My family will come with me. Therefore, I would like to know the details about this trip, such as the accommodation, the plans and the money we will cost. By the way, how do you deliver these materials to me? What’s the deadline before we make the final decision?
How do I pay for you?
Thank you for your attention. I am looking forward to your immediate response.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
请求信
Directions: You find your study load is too heavy. Write a letter to your college teacher:
1） you need to withdraw from two courses,
2） explain the reasons,
3） ask if it is possible to obtain a refund.
Dear Professor Smith,
I am writing to formally request to withdraw from two courses: Introduction to Elementary Education and Teaching Methods.
The main reason for reducing my course load is that I am finding it extremely difficult to manage six courses. Because I really have to work part time, I have no other choice but to decrease my course load. Besides, I would also like to request a tuition refund. I am sorry for any inconveniences I have caused by this change in plans. This decision was not taken lightly, and I do appreciate the kind consideration you have shown to me.
Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me at 82036600. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
祝贺信：
Directions：Your friend Smith told you he had started his own business .Write a letter to him to congratulate him and give him some helpful suggestions.
Dear Smith,(大家注意此处是逗号)
I was happy to learn that you had opened your own firm and I would like to express my warmest congratulations.
The final realization of your long-cherished dream should be attributed to your diligence, persistence and ambition. I am glad that your consistent pursuit of dream is rewarded now. As a good friend of you, I advise you to keep your ambition. Moreover, in response to challenges, please never to overestimate the difficulties and underestimate your ability.
Please accept my congratulations again. And I do believe you and your firm will achieve one success after another.
Sincerely yours,（逗号）
Li Ming（无符号，千万不要打点）
感谢信
Directions:
You have just returned from a visit to a university in Great Britain. And you were warmly treated there by Professor Smith. Please write a letter to express your thanks to him for his hospitality.
Dear Prof. Smith,
I would like to thank you very much for your kind hospitality and the honor you showed me during my recent visit to your university.
It was nice of you to introduce me so many of famous professors and celebrated scholars at your university. I feel obliged to you for the selfless assistance you render me. I appreciate it more than I can say.
Finally, I wish I can have an opportunity to repay your kindness when you come to China in the near future. Again with many thanks.
Sincerely yours,（逗号）
Li Ming（无符号，千万不要打点）
申请信：
Directions:
You want to apply for the following job: a personal secretary to the general manager, write a letter to Mr. Byron to:
1) show your interest,
2) describe yourself, and
3) explain why you would be suitable for the job.
Dear Mr. Byron,
I am writing to apply for（求职） the position as the personal secretary to the general manager./（求学）(the opportunity for further study in your university).
I am fully confident that I am the right candidate. To begin with, I major in secretary and will graduate from Peking University. I have a good academic performance in school and have been the top five students for four years in my grade. In addition, I am an open-minded, cooperative and ready-to-help girl.
Enclosed is my resume to provide additional information. Thank you for your time and consideration. I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely，
Li Ming
2015考研英语作文预测之环保
APEC结束不久，你对她的印象都有什么？是六天的假期，还是宽敞的街道？是地铁出行更加不便，还是很多旅游景点的封闭，抑或是随着APEC而来的越来越多的利好政策？不过你应该会听到过一个词——APEC蓝，如果你身在北京，那你更有可能切实地感受到它。其实，APCE blue虽然稍纵即逝，但是人们对美好环境的追求确实一直在进行中，考研英语作文一直都是贴合当今热点话题的，那么环保自然就成为了考研英语作文的热点之一，下面给大家带来一些与环保有关的单词和句子，开背吧！
一、闪光词汇
wastebin 垃圾桶
plastic 塑料制品
environment pollution 环境污染
environmental conservation 环境保护
environmental legislation 环境立法
environmental reform 环境改造
recycl循环
energy saving节能
green house绿色环境
not polluted无污染
advanced technology新科技
二、闪光例句
In major cities, residents are expected to get around by foot, bicycle or use public transportation.
在大城市，居民应该尽量步行，或用自行车或公共交通工具出行。
We should continue initiating some constructive initiatives, such as Car Free Day and its like, in promoting green transportation and bringing about cleaner air.
在促进绿色交通和带来更多的干净空气方面，我们应该继续采取（initiate）一些建设性的措施（initiatives),比如无车日活动等等。
三、闪光参考范文
As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, a boy is sleeping soundly and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again。
This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life. Many people are used to doing everything with the television on, not actually watching it at all. Such a habit can cause waste of much electricity and energy, and result in the emission of carbon. This deviates from the popular concept of “low carbon life” — to reduce the emission of carbon, especially carbon dioxide, to protect our environment and realize sustainable development. According to statistics, if we can decrease the time for having the television on by one hour each day, we can deduce the amount of carbon emission by 4. 71 kilogram each month。
To serve as responsible stewards of the planet, we must promote and popularize a low carbon life among the public from every detail in our daily life. We must change the past practice of sacrificing long-term environmental health for short-term rapid economic development, and shift to developing green economy, circular economy and low carbon economy. All these effective measures can help us to reach harmony between development of the society and health of the nature。
【写作点拨】
图片中一个小男孩，早已进入甜蜜的梦乡，电视却依然在播放，这时候妈妈走过来帮他关了电视，还责备他为什么总是忘记关电视。显然，直观看来，这幅图是在告诉我们要节约用电。但是，我们如果从更宏观，更深层次的角度去思考，这幅图正是在告诉我们一个流行的生活理念：低碳生活。所以本文旨在倡导一种低碳的生活方式，倡导环保的生活理念。因此本文的内容和结构可如下：
第一段：描述图画。作文一开始，要把图画中的内容大概描述清楚，快速准确地领会图画所要传达的内容；
第二段：列举现象，分析影响。接着，分析这种现象产生的原因，会带来什么样的危害；
第三段：建议措施，展望未来。最后，提出解决问题的方法，例如低碳生活要采取什么样的措施，我们作为普通人应该如何从一点一滴做起等。
通过今天的学习，相信大家对环保这一话题有了一定了解，其实不管是改革发展带来的阵痛还是复习考研这一段的迷茫，记住里尔克的一句话：Where there is what victory, stand mean everything！哪里有什么胜利可言，挺住意味着一切 ！
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