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高考英语高级改写示例

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高考英语高级改写示例

  在日常的学习中,大家都没少背知识点吧?知识点就是一些常考的内容,或者考试经常出题的地方。哪些才是我们真正需要的知识点呢?下面是小编整理的高考英语高级改写示例,供大家参考借鉴,希望可以帮助到有需要的朋友。

高考英语高级改写示例

  高考英语高级改写示例1

  ◆ 巧妙的改写

  (1)Only 改成no one but

  Only Tom passed the exam last week. → No one but Tom passed the exam.

  (2)as soon as …改成No sooner…than…/Hardly…when…/Immediately…/The moment

  No sooner had we arrived at the cinema than the film started.

  (3)have sb/sth do/done

  The girl was knocked off her bicycle and had her leg broken (her leg was broken.).

  (4)变换插入语的位置

  ① However, they suggest fees should be charged low. →

  They suggest, however, fees should be charged low. (NMET 2002)

  ② I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well you’ve learned Chinese. →

  This is a good chance for you, I think, to show your singing talent, and how well you’ve learned Chinese. (2004 全国卷Ⅰ)

  (5) 用同位语代替非限制性定语从句

  Meimei, who is seven years old, has been learning to ride a bicycle for several days.→

  Meimei, a girl of thirteen, has been learning to ride a bicycle for several days. (2002上海卷)

  Shakespeare, a son from a poor family, a man of little education, wrote plays and poems that are read all over the world.(2008年湖南卷)

  ◆ 倒装句

  ① The library is to the east of the teaching building. →

  East of the teaching building is the library.

  ② Although we are tired, we are happy.→

  Tired as we are, we are happy.

  ③ Only in this way can he grow to be a useful man. (2002 上海卷)

  ④ May all your dreams come true! May our friendship last till the end of the universe.!(2007年湖南卷)

  ◆ 被动语态

  ① Opinions are divided on the question. (NMET 2002)

  ② All classes are taught by teachers with rich experience in teaching foreign students. (2004全国卷 Ⅳ)

  ③ New factories, houses and roads have been built.(2004 江苏卷)

  高考英语高级改写示例2

  (一)主题句原则

  一个好的主题句是文章成功的一半。不仅文章有主题,段落有纲,句也必有中心。文章失却主题,就会不知所云;落无纲,则一盘散沙,句缺中心,就无意义。所以,在立足于篇章时,一定要首先明确文的主题;在发展段落时,也要首先写好主题句。从PETS三的`特点来考虑,主题句最好是置于文首或段首,这样让人一目了然! 以下就是两个实用的开门见山式发展主题句的方法。

  ●To begin with, we must attach the greatest importance possible to this issue/fact (key word).

  ●As is well known to all, it is now high time that we took this (topic word) into serious consideration.

  (二) 句式变化原则

  好的文章动静结合、张弛有度有节奏感。句式也是一样,要有变化性,这不仅能使文章更生动,也是语言表达方式的需要和表达能力的体现。句式的变化,主要是要注意两点:

  ● 不要从头至尾使用一种句型。

  ● 长短句结合。

  由于语言功底的欠缺和惯用思维,很多人写的文章一种句式到头,如:

  I think …

  I hope…

  He does it.

  He will take it

  这样的文章虽然意思表达出来了,却显得呆板,欠生动。解决的办法是:

  1.间或使用主从复句。

  Because he is very much determined, he will carry it out this time. (原因)

  比较:He is very much determined. He will carry it out this time.

  2.使用分词结构句。

  The weather being fine, a large number of people went sightseeing.

  比较:The weather is fine. A large number of people went sightseeing.

  Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.

  比较:Africa is the second largest continent. Its size is about three times that of China.

  3.使用不定式句。

  To be or not to be, that is a question. (莎士比亚)

  To study or not to study, that is much different.(引申)

  To do it well, you must plan it well.

  比较:You want to do it well. And you must plan it well.

  4.倒装句

  Only when we fully recognize its importance can we have control of its essence.

  比较:After we fully recognize its importance, we can have control of its essence.

  No sooner had he arrived home than it began to rain.

  比较:He arrived home. And it began to rain.

  5.失衡句

  whether or not he will come is still unknown to all the people present.

  比较:No one present knows whether he will come or not.

  That he has done it all by himself is known to everyone.

  比较:Everyone knows that he has done it all by himself.

  当然,句子并不是越长越好,也不是越复杂水平就越高。凡事皆有度。太多长句的堆砌让人觉得是买弄。有时侯,一个短小精辟的句子可以起到画龙点睛的作用。特别是在文末段尾。比如:

  ●As a creature, every one knows.

  ●Actions speak louder than words.

  ●Practice makes perfect.

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