考试英语记叙文作文指导
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【文体简介】
记叙文是以叙述人物的经历或事物的发展变化过程为主的一种文体 ，是写作训练中最普遍、最基本的一种文体。记叙文一般可分为两类:一是对事件进行写实性叙述的事实记叙，如新闻报道、个人经历、人物生平、访问、游记等;二是虚构性记叙，如科幻小说、故事等。
记叙文要求学生根据所给情景，组织语言材料，编写成文。一般说来记叙文有时间、地点、人物、事件、原因和结果六要素，写作时要表达清楚。记人时，要注意介绍人物的身世、经历和事迹等;叙事时要描写事情发生和发展的过程及前因后果等。
【重点诠释】
考生在写作的时候，要尽量避免逐条翻译以及过于平铺直叙。在每一幅图画描述的过程中，可以在紧扣文章的基础上，增加适当的发挥和议论。图画作文若想得到高分，一定要让阅卷人看到文章的时候。有一种身临其境，饶有兴趣的感觉。
还要注意表达内容要点时要使用丰富多样的表达方式。包括词汇多样、句法多样，段落结构多样。以上是本题获得高分数的关键。
【写作点拨】
叙事类记叙文以叙述事件为主，突出事件发生、发展和解决的过程。在写这类记叙文时要做到：
1. 重组材料，确定要点。叙事类记叙文写作前要进行立意、构思和选材等一系列过程，高考中的书面表达一般为控制性写作,通常会提供短文的主题和写作内容,考生要 对提供的材料进行再加工,确定写作的顺序、要点和重点,拟定使用的.句型和词组。
2. 结构完整、前后呼应。写记叙文必须有头有尾，一般来说，记叙时要把与一件事有关的六要素都交代清楚。文章的主题和内容要一致，文章的结尾与开头要呼应。
3. 人称统一、线索明确。记叙文可用“你、我、他”三种人称，但如果题目要求你使用某种人称，则必须遵循要求;叙事类记叙文一般按照事件发展的前后顺序进行叙述。
【常见问题】
1. 要点不全。要点是否齐全通常决定文章的档次。书面表达要上档次，要点齐全是关键。要点提示类书面表达一般不会出现这样的问题，看图作文则常会由于学生观察不细心等原因遗漏要点。
2. 线索不清。有些短文条理混乱，主要原因是没有确定好写作线索。叙事类文章一般按时间顺序来写。
3. 时态不明。叙事时时态混乱是学生常犯的错误之一。叙事类记叙文所记的一般是过去发生的事，原则上用过去时，有时也用现在时。
4. 主次不分。有些同学写作时平均用力，面面俱到，写出来的东西主题不突出，显得呆板乏味。
【写作模式】
叙文按照“开端一发展一高潮一结局”的顺序进行叙述。文章的开头，通常要交代事件发展的时间、地点、有关人物间的相互关系等内容，帮助读者理解事件的本身。但为了避免写文章时漫无目的，同时也为了使读者对作者意图更加明了，我们通常有必要在文章开头给出全文的主题。
比如:
(1)He is a great person in history.
(2 )Last Sunday，I took the G R E.It was the longest test I had ever taken.
(3 )My middle school years were the best part of my life.
【佳作赏析】
请根据下面的要点叙述一次看马戏的经历。
1. 期中考试后放了三天假，我看了一场马戏。
2.表演非常精彩。有小狗表演，独轮车表演等。最刺激的节目是走钢丝。一个男演员手里拿着一根平衡杠，头上坐着一个女孩，肩上的钢杠上还挑着两个女孩。当他小心翼翼走过钢丝的时候，观众报以热烈的掌声。
3. 马戏是一种力与美结合的艺术。通过这次表演，我体会到了中国马戏艺术的博大精深。
参考词汇：马戏表演circus show 刺激的thrilling 钢丝tightrope 平衡杆balancing pole 钢杆steel bar
<范文>
Watching a circus show
I had a three-day holiday after the mid-term examination, so I decided to relax myself by watching a circus show.
A girl appeared on the stage. She rode a one-wheel bike on a small table with a lot of flowers on it. She didn’t knock down even one flower. Some little dogs also did a good job. The four little dogs did some amusing tricks and one of them could calculate the number! How clever they were!
The most thrilling program was to see a young man walking on a tightrope. He stood on the very thin rope with a balancing pole on his hands. On his head sat a little girl. Another two girls sat on the ends of a steel bar on his shoulder. The young man took his first step with great care. The rope held. One step! Two, three.... Every viewer held his breath. All the people were anxious about his safety, because the young actor didn’t fasten a safety belt. Any little carelessness could cost his life! At last he succeeded in walking across the 8-meter-long tightrope.
The performance lasted about two hours. I had a good time at the show.
The circus is the art of combination of strength and beauty. The Chinese circus is so cool!
<点评>
小作者叙述了一次看马戏的经历。文章以时间为线索，叙述清楚，详略得当，层次分明，描写生动，过渡自然，显示了作者相当扎实的语言功底。在文章最后，小作者还谈了自己的感想，深化了主题。难能可贵的是小作者使用了较多的高级 表达方式，使文章增彩不少。如：复合形容词(onewheel, 8-meter-long)，with复合结构(with a balancing pole on his hands)，倒装句(On his head sat a little girl)，感叹句(How clever they were!)等。
【巩固训练】
根据提示的情景，用英文写一篇80-100词的短文。不必根据中文逐字逐句翻译。
我们的学校历史悠久。毕业学生中不少已成为各自领域中的专家。近年来，我们的学校发生了很大的变化。我们为自己的学校感到自豪。
【学生实作】
Our school has a long history. It is told that it dated from one hundred years ago. From it was founded on, there were more and more students in it. And the former students all did well in their studying. Some of them are outstanding. Because of their good studies and hard work, many of the schoolleavers have become experts in different fields. These years our school has changed great, it becomes more and more beautiful. Besides, the teachers' teaching methods are more advanced than before. At the same time, the students study very hard, and we are determined to make great contribution to our school.
We like our school very much! We are proud of it!
【评析】
1. 第2句：is told 应为is said。(以下错误均在第一段)
2. 第2句：dated应改为dates。
3. 第3句：from...on不能表示从过去的某个时间一直到现在的情况，因此这里用since较好。另外，from...on中间应是名词，而不能是从句。
4. 第3句：主句中应用现在完成时态，表示从过去一直到现在的情况。把there were改为there have been。
5. 第4句：studying最好改为studies，指"学业"。
6. 第5句：本句应是说以前的学生的情况，are应改为were。
7. 第7句：great应改为greatly。修饰动词应用副词形式。
8. 第7句：our school has changed greatly是一个完整的句子，其后也是一个完整的句子，而两个完整的句子没有连词时是不能并列的。最好中间用句号，使各自独立成句。
9. 第9句：study改为are studying更为生动。
10. 第9句：very hard最好改为even harder，以对应前面的比较级。
【总评】
优点 ：
1. 基本写出了题目要求的几方面的内容。
2. 这是一篇半开放的写作。习作者适当地增补细节对内容进行了展开，使内容较为全面、丰富。
3. 语句表达较为连贯。
不足：
1. 有一处句与句之间没有连词连接的情况，这是不符合英语习惯的。
2. 谓语动词的时态有几处运用不当。
【修改之后】
Our school has a long history. It is said that it dates from one hundred years ago. Since it was founded, there have been more and more students in it. And the former students all did well in their studi es. Some of them were outstanding. Because of their good studies and hard work, many of the schoolleavers have become experts in different fields. These years our school has changed greatly. It becomes more and more beautiful. Besides, the teachers' teaching methods are more advanced than before. At the same time, the students are studying even harder, and we are determined to make great contribution to our school.
We like our school very much! We are proud of it!
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