(1)软弱、羞怯的`： If you think I can fill the position after you have read my letter, I shall be glad to talk with you.
(2)改写后(较佳)： If my qualifications meet your standards, I would be happy to speak with you in person.
(1)怀疑，不妥、不安全的： If you are interested, please let me know immediately, as I\m sure an interview will convince you I\m the man for the job.
(2)改写后：I would like to request an interview. You can reach me by telephone at Beijing 123456 between the hours of 7-9 a.m. and 5:30-9:30p.m. any evening.
(1) 哀求式的句子、不够完整(漏掉面谈时间)：I would appreciate the opportunity for an interview. I can be reached by calling Beijing 12345678.
(2) 改写后： May I have the opportunity to discuss this matter further with you? My telephone number is Beijing 12345678. You can reach me between nine and five o\clock during the day.http://www.cnrencai.com/