Replying to your advertisement …… Answering your advertisement …… Believing that there is an opportunity …… Thinking that there is a vacancy in your company …… Having read your ad ……
A：(1)Replying to your recent advertisement in the Boston Evening Globe, I wish to apply for the position of sales manager……
(2)In applying for the position of sales manager I offer my qualifications, which I believe will meet your exacting requirements.
B：(1)I believe after reading your advertisement in this mornings Journal that you have just the opportunity I am looking for. 个人简历
(2)your advertisement in this mornings Journal for an adjustment manager prompts me to offer you my qualifications for this position
C：(1) Having read your advertisement in the New York Times for an accountant, I thought you might be interested in my application.
(2)In your advertisement for an accountant, you indicated that you require the services of a competent person, with thorough training in the field of cost accounting. Please consider me an applicant for the position. Here are my reasons for believing I am qualified for this work.
A：I hesitate to state a definite salary, but, as long as you have requested me to , I should consider 6,500 a month satisfactory. 我对待遇总是无法定下确切数目，但既然您要我说明，我认为月薪六千五百元就满意了。
B： Although it is difficult for me to say what compensation I should deserve, I should consider******a month a fair initial salary. 虽然我很难说待遇应该是多少，我认为每月******起薪合适。 简历封面
C：I feel it is presumptuous of me to state what my salary should be. My first consideration is to satisfy you completely. However, while I am serving my apprenticeship, I should consider*****a month satisfactory compensation. 我不敢冒昧提出起薪是多少。最初我仅想如何做好工作，使您满意。在学徒（试用）期间，月薪*****即可。
A： As for salary, I do not know what to say. Would$4,500 a month be too much? 至于起薪，我不知怎么说，月薪四千五百元会不会太多？
B：Do you think I should be asking too much if I said 5000 dollars a month? 若要求月薪五千元，会不会太高？
C：You know what my services are worth better than I do . All I want is a living wage. 对我工作的价值您比我更清楚。我能够糊口即可。
A：(1)软弱、羞怯的： If you think I can fill the position after you have read my letter, I shall be glad to talk with you. 读完此信后若您认为我还可以，我愿意和你谈一谈。
(2)改写后（较佳）： If my application has convinced you of my ability to satisfy you, I should welcome the opportunity to talk with you, so that you may judge my personal qualifications further.
B:(1)怀疑，不妥、不安全的： If youre interested, let me know immediately, as Im sure and interview will convince you Im the man for the job. 如果贵公司有兴趣，请与我联系，我认为与您面谈后可以使您相信，我可以胜任这份工作。
(2)改写后： May I have an interview? You can reach me by telephone at Beijing 123456 between the hours of 7-9 a.m. and 5:30-9:30p.m. any evening. 我们可以面谈吗？可在每天上午七至九点，下午五点半至九点与我电话联系,号码：123456。
C：陈腐的句子： Hoping you will give me an interview, I am……（我希望与您面谈） Anticipating a favorable decision, I wait your……（等候您的佳音） Trusting your reply will be satisfactory, I remain(静候满意的答复)
D：哀求式的句子，不够完整（漏掉面谈时间）： Wont you please give me the chance to interview your? I can be reached by calling Beijing 12345678.请给我一个面试机会，联系电话12345678.
改写后： May I have the opportunity to discuss this matter further with you? My telephone is Beijing 12345678. You can reach me between nine and five oclock during the day. 能不能与您面谈以便进一步商讨？我的电话是12345678。我从上午九点到下午五点都比较方便。 个人简历
E：太过自信的句子： I am quite certain that an interview will substantiate my statements Between two and four every afternoon except Tuesday you can reach me by telephoning 12345678. 我深信面谈可以证实我的话。您可在每天下午二至四点（星期二例外）打电话12345678通知我。
F：较具体有效的句子。 May I have an interview? My residence telephone is (010) 12345678. You reach me by calling that number until June 30. After July 2, my address will be XXXX, XXXX Street, XXXX District. 能否给我一个面试机会？我的住宅电话为12345678。六月三十日以前我都在此处，七月二日以后，我的新址为***************。
A：I think that I should probably make a good ***** for you. 我想我可能成为贵公司的优秀的员工。
B：I am confident that my experience and references will show you that I can fulfill the particular requirements of your ***** position. 我想信我的经验和别人对我的推荐可以使您充分了解我符合贵公司*****一职的需要。 简历下载
C：I recently completed a course in filing at the ***** School of Business. I am competent not only to install a filing system that will fulfill the needs of your organization, but I am also well qualified to operate it efficiently. 最近我在***********读完*******课程，我相信不仅可以设计一套符合您的要求档案分类系统，而且可以进行有效的操作。
D：I feel quite certain that as a result of the course in filing which I completed at the ******** School of Business, I can install and operate efficiently a filing system for your organization. 我相信经过我在*******学校的********课程学习之后，我能够替贵公司设置并且操作一套档案分类系统。
April 13,20xx P.O. Box 36 BIIT University Beijing,China 100000
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my name is qiu job. i am currently a graduate of nanjing university of posts and telecommunications in early july of XX. i am writing to express my interests in your company. the job sounds particularly interesting. it is precisely the kind of work i have wanted to do for many years. my experiences obtained from inside or outside university thus far have, i think, given me the attitudes and the understanding that would enable me to learn the details of the position you are in demand.
if an ability to take direction well, and to carry out orders faithfully, is important to you, then i may be the good person for the job you’ve advertised.
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july 13, XX
rohn and hass china inc.
488 wuning rd (s), shanghai
dear mr. director,
i have learned from the newspaper that you are employing an administrative secretary. i am very much interested in this position.
i have worked as an administrative secretary for a chemical company in shanghai for three years, so i have some understanding of the chemical industry. i graduated from the east china university of technology with a bachelor degree. i am fluent in both spoken and written english, having obtained cet-4 and cet-6 certificates. in addition, i have strong computer skills.
enclosed please find my resume.
i am looking forward to your reply.
In reply to your advertisement in today's newspaper regarding a vacancy in your office, I wish to apply for the position of senior clerk, which you have specified.
I feel confident that I can meet your special requirements indicating that the candidate must have a high command of English, for I graduated from the English Language Department of _____ University three years ago.
In addition to my study of English while in the University, I have worked for three years as secretary in the firm of
ABC Trading Co. Ltd.
The main reason for changing my employment is to gain more experience with a superior trading company like yours. I believe that my education and experience will prove useful for work in your office.
I am enclosing my personal history, certificate of graduation and letter of recommendation from the president of the University, I shall be obliged if you will give me a personal interview at your convenience.
Very truly yours,
My name is LY and I will graduate from Xi’an FanYi University in the year 20xx. My major is secretary in English department.
It’s my great pleasure to have this opportunity to improve our mutual understanding. During the three –year college study，I tried my best to learn all kinds of knowledge，and weigh the hard work of my teachers and myself; I have mastered English listening，speaking，writing and reading skills.
Moreover， I have a good command of Business English and the basic theory， public relationship of secretary. Meanwhile， in order to enlarge my knowledge， I always read some newspapers and magazines about business and trade， and I used to do some representative of business in my spare time. At the same time， I learnt computer skills during my summer vacation，and now I’m familiar with Office 20xx. It is my three –year college life that makes me form my life attitude. Also my three-year college life that makes me rich in knowledge，and it’s also my three-year college life that makes me form my life attitude. Honesty，Trust，Diligence is principle of how to be a man. 更多自我介绍请进：
As a college graduate，I believe “where there is a will， there is a way”， and I will try my best to do a good job in my business. So I sincerely hope that I can make a position in your company so that I can serve for the company in the future.